“ I think what you wrote was very reasonable.
But, what about this? what if you added a little content?
I mean, I don't wish to tell you how to run your
blog, but what if you added a title to maybe grab a person's attention? I mean El día que
fuimos teloneros de Leo Jiménez is a little vanilla. You might peek
at Yahoo's front page and note how they create post headlines to
grab people interested. You might add a related video or a picture or two to get people excited about what you've got to say.
In my opinion, it might bring your posts a little livelier. ”